Tuesday, 9 September 2025

Session 1: Practice in analysing a text

 Please read the text below and find which ones are introduction, body, and conclusion. Put your answers in the blog's comment coloumn. To do the exercise, please open this link. 

17 comments:

  1. Aulia khairunisa
    231250005
    MPI 5A

    1. Introduction terdapat pada bagian Introduction yaitu halaman 1211-1214
    2. Body terdapat pada bagian Research method hingga diiscussion yaitu pada halaman1214-1221
    3. Conclusion terdapat pada bagian Conclusion yaitu pada halaman 1221-1222

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  2. Nama : Hikmah Islamiyati
    NIM: 231250011
    Kelas: MPI 5A


    - Introduction (Pendahuluan)
    The introduction discusses the role of vocational students as assets to society who need proper training for specific jobs. It highlights that vocational schools provide practical skills for occupations like technology and healthcare, aiming to prepare students for the workforce. The document points out a major challenge in these schools: the imbalance between English curriculum material and instructional time. With only two hours of English class per week, students' proficiency is hindered. The introduction emphasizes the importance of communicative competence, which is the ability to communicate effectively in a language. Previous studies have identified several obstacles students face in developing this competence, including a lack of practice, limited vocabulary, and a fear of making mistakes. The study aims to investigate the level of students' communicative competence, their needs, and appropriate teaching methods.


    - Body (Isi)
    ​This section outlines the research methodology and findings. The study used a descriptive qualitative approach with interviews, observation, and document analysis as its instruments. The respondents included 60 students, 3 English teachers, and 2 industry staff members from Garuda Maintenance Facilities (GMF).
    ​The main findings revealed that most students felt the allocated time for English was inadequate and that teachers used traditional teaching methods. The teachers admitted that they did not consistently follow the 2013 curriculum, which they felt did not specifically focus on the needs of the workplace. An industry representative from GMF also confirmed that while graduates possess the necessary technical skills, their English proficiency is still lacking.
    ​Overall, the body highlights a significant gap between what is taught in vocational schools and what the industry requires, along with issues in curriculum implementation and teaching methodology.


    - Conclusion (Kesimpulan)
    The study concludes that there is a significant gap between the English skills desired by the industry and the actual competencies of Indonesian vocational students. This is attributed to factors like teacher commitment, students' varying competencies, and school facilities. To address this, the study recommends that teachers commit to syllabus development and align their methods with students' needs. It also suggests that schools should recalibrate their English teaching strategies to be more contextualized, job-specific, and skill-oriented. The conclusion emphasizes that by implementing these changes, vocational schools can prepare students to be linguistically equipped for the global workforce.

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  3. Nama : Iin Anisah
    NIM : 231250007
    Kelas : MPI 5-A

    • The introduction discusses how vocational students are regarded as valuable assets and how vocational schools are designed to provide practical skills for specific occupations such as technology, healthcare, business, and industry. It also points out the challenges in English learning and sets the purpose of the study: to investigate students’ communicative competence and the appropriate methods to develop it.
    • The body explains the research method, participants, and findings. It shows that students still have weaknesses in vocabulary, phonology, and practical communication, even though they perform better in grammar and structure. The discussion highlights the gap between curriculum and industry needs, the lack of innovative teaching methods, and the inconsistency in using the syllabus.
    • The conclusion emphasizes the gap between desired English skills and students’ actual abilities. It suggests that teachers need to commit to the syllabus, apply student-centered methods, and collaborate through professional forums to create a standardized syllabus for vocational students.

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  4. Dinda larasati
    231250024
    MPI 5A

    - Introduce
    which is included in the introduction is, Vocational schools are educational institutions that provide practical skills and training for specific occupations. English classes in vocational schools face a significant challenge due to the imbalance between curriculum material and instructional time. Foreign language teaching is crucial in today's interconnected world, providing practical communication skills, cultural understanding, and global awareness.

    - Body
    which is included in the body of the article is, This research employed a descriptive qualitative method with 60 students, 3 English teachers, and 2 industry officers. The findings show that students’ communicative competence is still low, teachers rarely apply the syllabus and use traditional methods, and industry views graduates’ English proficiency as inadequate for workplace standards. The discussion highlights a misalignment between curriculum content and workplace language needs.

    - Conclusion
    which is included in the conclusion of the article is, The study highlights a gap between desired English skills and actual competencies. Teachers’ commitment, students’ competence, and school facilities are key factors. Enhancing communicative competence is essential for future career prospects and workforce success.



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    1. NAMA : SITI AMAS SAPINAH
      NIM : 231250013
      MPI 5A

      -Introduction (pendahuluan)
      The Introduction of the text highlights the significance of English communicative competence for vocational students who are expected to face global competition in the workplace. It also describes the main problems such as the limited time allocation for English lessons, the lack of teacher commitment, and the misalignment between the curriculum and industry needs. The introduction clearly sets the purpose of the study, which is to investigate the students’ level of competence and their actual needs in learning English.

      - Body (isi)
      The Body consists of the research method, findings, and discussion. The method section explains that the study used a descriptive qualitative approach involving students, teachers, and industry officers. The findings reveal that students are relatively strong in grammar but weak in vocabulary, phonology, and practical communication. Teachers are often inconsistent in applying the syllabus, mostly rely on traditional methods, and rarely use media. The curriculum, meanwhile, provides general English instead of specific workplace English, which creates a gap between what is taught in schools and what is required in the labor market. The discussion emphasizes that teacher training, more interactive learning, and curriculum alignment are urgently needed.

      -Conclusion (kesimpulan)
      The Conclusion restates that the communicative competence of vocational students is still far from the expected standard. The causes include teachers’ low commitment, insufficient facilities, and curriculum misfit with industry demands. Therefore, the study recommends that teachers apply the syllabus consistently, implement student-centered approaches, and participate in professional forums to standardize materials. It also suggests regular supervision and curriculum revision to ensure that students are well-prepared to compete in the global workplace.

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  5. Nama: Siti Khoriyah
    NIM : 231250008
    Kelas : MPI 5A

    - Introduction
    Vocational schools provide practical training for specific jobs such as technology, healthcare, and engineering. However, English learning in these schools faces challenges due to limited class time, lack of suitable materials, and the need for job-specific communication skills. Communicative competence is essential for vocational students to succeed in the workforce, as it enables them to use English effectively in real-life situations.
    Many students struggle with limited vocabulary, fear of making mistakes, lack of motivation, and minimal exposure to authentic materials. This study aims to investigate the level and needs of vocational students’ communicative competence and identify appropriate teaching methods to improve their English skills for future employment.

    - Body
    The interview results from vocational students in Tangerang reveal that most students are dissatisfied with their English learning experience. A total of 52 students stated that the time allocated for English learning is insufficient, and 55 students said that the learning media used in class is unengaging and monotonous. Additionally, many students felt that learning objectives were not clearly communicated and that teaching methods were not applied effectively.
    Interviews with English teachers and industry professionals further explored how to develop students' communicative competence. Teachers confirmed that the school uses the 2013 Curriculum (K13), which is available and serves as a guide for teaching and assessment. The curriculum is considered important because it includes clear objectives, materials, media, methods, and assessment tools. Teachers emphasized the need to use more creative and interactive media to make English learning more interesting and effective for students.

    - Conclusion
    there is a gap between the expected English skills and the actual abilities of vocational high school students in Indonesia. To overcome this, teachers need to commit to syllabus development, adjust teaching methods to students’ needs, conduct regular supervision, and encourage collaboration to make vocational education quality more consistent and relevant.

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  6. Aulia khairunisa
    231250005
    MPI 5A

    1. Introduction

    Found in the INTRODUCTION section (pp. 1211–1214).
    It explains:

    The importance of vocational education and its link to English language skills.

    Challenges in teaching English at vocational schools (limited class hours, lack of motivation, insufficient media, and mismatch with industry needs).

    The concept and importance of communicative competence.

    The research aims: to investigate the students’ communicative competence level, their needs, and ways to improve it.

    2. Body

    Covers RESEARCH METHOD, FINDINGS, and DISCUSSION (pp. 1214–1221).
    It includes:

    1. Research method – descriptive qualitative design using observation, interviews, and syllabus analysis.
    2. Participants – 60 students, 3 English teachers, and 2 industry officers (Garuda Maintenance Facilities).
    3. Instruments – interviews, observation, and documents.
    4. Data analysis – Miles & Huberman model.
    5. Findings:

    Students’ communicative competence level is relatively low.

    Main issues: limited learning time, lack of learning media, teachers not applying the syllabus, and mismatch between curriculum and industry demands.

    Teachers and industry representatives confirm that English teaching is still general and not aligned with workplace communication needs.

    6. Discussion – emphasizes the gap between national curriculum expectations and actual students’ skills. While grammar and structure are relatively good, students lack vocabulary, fluency, and workplace-oriented communication. Teachers’ reliance on textbooks and traditional methods also hinders communicative learning.

    3. Conclusion

    Found in the CONCLUSION section (pp. 1221–1222).
    It highlights:

    A significant gap between the desired English skills and students’ actual competence.

    Contributing factors: teachers’ lack of commitment, students’ varied abilities, and limited facilities.

    Recommendations: teachers should commit to the syllabus, adjust teaching to students’ work-related needs, program heads should supervise regularly, and MGMP forums should standardize vocational syllabi.

    Improving communicative competence is essential to help vocational graduates compete in the global workforce.

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  7. Shofwah Badiyah Leksono ( 231250002 )

    ( Introduction )
    The study addresses the low English communicative competence of Indonesian vocational students. It highlights that while these schools provide practical training for professions like automotive and engineering, students' language skills are not sufficient for the global job market. The research, a descriptive qualitative study, aimed to determine the students' level of English competence and identify ways to improve it

    ( Body )
    The research found a significant gap between the English skills of vocational students and the needs of the industry. Although students have a moderate grasp of grammar, they lack proficiency in vocabulary, pronunciation, and practical communication for the workplace. This is mainly due to a curriculum that focuses on general English instead of industry-specific needs, unengaging traditional teaching methods, and a limited class time of just two hours per week.

    (Conclusion)
    The study concludes that the low English proficiency among vocational students is due to a lack of teacher commitment, inadequate school facilities, and varied student competencies. To address this, the document recommends that teachers commit to using and improving their syllabi based on student and industry needs. It also suggests that school administrators provide regular supervision and create forums for teachers to share best practices. These changes are necessary to equip graduates with the essential language skills needed for the global workforce.

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  8. Shofwah Badiyah Leksono.
    ( 231250002 ) MPI 5A

    ( Introduction )
    The study addresses the low English communicative competence of Indonesian vocational students. It highlights that while these schools provide practical training for professions like automotive and engineering, students' language skills are not sufficient for the global job market. The research, a descriptive qualitative study, aimed to determine the students' level of English competence and identify ways to improve it

    ( Body )
    The research found a significant gap between the English skills of vocational students and the needs of the industry. Although students have a moderate grasp of grammar, they lack proficiency in vocabulary, pronunciation, and practical communication for the workplace. This is mainly due to a curriculum that focuses on general English instead of industry-specific needs, unengaging traditional teaching methods, and a limited class time of just two hours per week.

    (Conclusion)
    The study concludes that the low English proficiency among vocational students is due to a lack of teacher commitment, inadequate school facilities, and varied student competencies. To address this, the document recommends that teachers commit to using and improving their syllabi based on student and industry needs. It also suggests that school administrators provide regular supervision and create forums for teachers to share best practices. These changes are necessary to equip graduates with the essential language skills needed for the global workforce.

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  9. Amalia Az-Zahra
    231250030 MPI 5A
    1. Introduction
    Vocational students as youths have always been regarded as an asset to the social group
    by family, tribe or state. All students' programs are not well organized, so they need to be
    properly organized and trained for a specific job. Pramesti and Susanto (2023) also mentioned
    that Vocational schools itself are educational institutions that provide practical skills and
    training for specific occupations such as technology, healthcare, business, and industry. They
    seek to provide students with the knowledge and abilities required to enter the workforce after
    completing their education, with an emphasis on job-specific skills and career routes. On the
    flip side, their job performance relies on having the required manipulative skill, adequate
    technical knowledge, and the intelligence to apply that knowledge to the job's challenges
    (Lubis, Yudistira, & Saputra, 2025).

    2. Body
    Research Design
    This research employed a descriptive method with a qualitative approach, focusing on
    collecting, analyzing, and interpreting non-numerical data to provide a rich and detailed
    understanding of the phenomenon under investigation. As emphasized in qualitative research,
    the primary goal is to explore meaning, experiences, and perspectives rather than quantifying
    variables.
    Research Participants or Population and Sample
    This research conducted at one of private vocational school in Tangerang City,
    Indonesia. Vocational schools have become primary agenda of Ministry of Education and
    Culture since 2000 to produce proficient graduates (in the regulation of Education and Culture
    Ministry number 20 in 2006)
    Instruments
    The researcher used interviews, observations and documens for instrument in this study.
    To determine the level of communicative competence of students and teachers, Hughes' (2011)
    levels and areas of research were used.
    Data Analysis
    For data analysis, in this research use (Miles & Huberman, 1994) as it allows for a
    thorough description and analysis of multiple datasets, facilitating a more comprehensive
    approach to addressing research questions compared to using just one method
    3. Conclusion
    The study on Indonesian vocational students' English communicative competence
    highlights a significant gap between desired English skills and actual competencies. Factors
    contributing to this discrepancy include teachers' commitment, students' diverse competencies,
    and school facilities. To improve students' communicative abilities, the study recommends
    teachers to be committed to syllabus development, align teaching methods with students' needs,
    and adopt student-cantered approaches. Regular supervision and

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  10. Muhamad Fadil Idris
    231250006
    MPI 5A

    Introduction
    Vocational students as youths have always been regarded as an asset to the social group by family, tribe or state. All students' programs are not well organized, so they need to be properly organized and trained for a specific job. Pramesti and Susanto (2023) also mentioned that Vocational schools itself are educational institutions that provide practical skills and training for specific occupations such as technology, healthcare, business, and industry. They seek to provide students with the knowledge and abilities required to enter the workforce after completing their education, with an emphasis on job-specific skills and career routes. On the flip side, their job performance relies on having the required manipulative skill, adequate technical knowledge, and the intelligence to apply that knowledge to the job's challenges (Lubis, Yudistira, & Saputra, 2025). ........ (1211-1215)

    Body
    Students’ Level Communicative Competence and Students’ Need

    The First research objective is to find out the students’ level communicative competence and their need in English subject. Researchers conducted observation and structured interviews with sixty vocational school students in Tangerang City.......... This study confirms that while there is foundational awareness of English language
    instruction in vocational schools, the implementation of communicative competence is largely theoretical and lacks practical application. To remedy this, schools must recalibrate their English teaching strategies by developing curriculum content that is contextualized, job-specific, and skill-oriented (Yasykur et al., 2023; Manalu et al., 2022).......... (1215-1221)

    CONCLUSION
    The study on Indonesian vocational students' English communicative competence highlights a significant gap between desired English skills and actual competencies. Factors contributing to this discrepancy include teachers' commitment, students' diverse competencies, and school facilities. To improve students' communicative abilities, the study recommends teachers to be committed to syllabus development, align teaching methods with students' needs, and adopt student-cantered approaches. Regular supervision and evaluation by program heads are also crucial. Collaborative efforts, can promote consistency and quality in vocational education.......... (1221-1222)

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  11. Muhammad Difa Izzati
    NIM. 231250023
    MPI - 5A

    *INTRODUCTION*
    Vocational students as youths have always been regarded as an asset to the social group
    by family, tribe or state. All students' programs are not well organized, so they need to be
    properly organized and trained for a specific job.....The last, summarizing the coded data in a table sheet. To ensure valid
    data, researchers use triangulation methods. Then the researcher ensures that the data taken is
    reliable because of the use of respondents who are in accordance with the research being
    conducted..... (1211 - 1215)

    *BODY*
    The First research objective is to find out the students’ level communicative competence
    and their need in English subject. Researchers conducted observation and structured interviews
    with sixty vocational school students in Tangerang City.....graduates but also linguistically equipped individuals who can thrive in the global
    workforce. These improvements are essential not only for enhancing educational quality but
    also for securing better employment opportunities for students in a competitive and
    interconnected world. (1215 - -1221)

    *CONCLUSION*
    The study on Indonesian vocational students' English communicative competence
    highlights a significant gap between desired English skills and actual competencies.....The
    last, teacher should create a MGMP forum to make standardize syllabus for vocational students.
    (1221- 1222)

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  12. Nama: Awaliyah Nasuha
    NIM: 231250031
    Kelas: MPI - 5A

    Introduction (pada hal. 1211–1214):
    The introduction is found in the section titled INTRODUCTION. It explains the role of vocational schools, the importance of English language competence, and challenges faced by students. For example, it begins with the sentence:
    “Vocational students as youths have always been regarded as an asset to the social group by family, tribe or state.” (pada hal. 1211).

    Body (pada hal. 1214–1221):
    The body is presented in the sections Research Method and Research Findings and Discussion. These pages describe the research design, participants, instruments, and data analysis. They also show the findings on students’ communicative competence levels, their needs, and how teachers and industry view the problem. For instance:
    “This research employed a descriptive method with a qualitative approach, focusing on collecting, analyzing, and interpreting non-numerical data…” (pada hal. 1214).

    Conclusion (pada hal. 1221–1222):
    The conclusion appears in the section CONCLUSION. It summarizes the gap between desired and actual English skills, identifies influencing factors, and offers recommendations. For example:
    “The study on Indonesian vocational students' English communicative competence highlights a significant gap between desired English skills and actual competencies.” (pada hal. 1221).

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  13. Nama : Lira Awanda
    NIM : 231250009
    Kelas : MPI 5 A

    Introduction:
    The introduction of the text is found in the section titled INTRODUCTION (pp. 1211–1214). It discusses the role of vocational schools, the challenges in teaching English, the importance of communicative competence, and previous studies highlighting students’ difficulties. It also explains the background and rationale for conducting the research, as well as the purposes of the study.

    Body:
    The body of the text is contained in the sections Research Method, Research Findings and Discussion (pp. 1214–1221). This part describes the research design, participants, instruments, and data analysis procedures. It then presents the findings on students’ communicative competence levels, needs, and challenges. Furthermore, it provides discussion connecting the findings with previous studies and theories, highlighting gaps between the curriculum and workplace requirements.

    Conclusion:
    The conclusion is found in the section titled CONCLUSION (pp. 1221–1222). It summarizes the main findings, pointing out the gap between students’ current English competence and the desired standard. It also gives recommendations such as teachers’ commitment to the syllabus, student-centered methods, regular supervision, and collaborative efforts to enhance the quality of vocational English education.

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  14. Nama = Chika Syahfitri
    Nim = 231250025
    Kelas = 5 MPI A

    - Introduction
    The introduction section is on page 1, starting with the heading "INTRODUCTION".
    Why is it considered the introduction?
    This section sets the context and background for the research, highlighting the importance of English language competence for vocational school students in the global era. It also explicitly states the research's objectives, which are to investigate the level and needs of students' communicative competence and to find appropriate teaching methods.

    - Body
    The main body of the research covers several subsections from page 3 to page 11, specifically "RESEARCH METHOD" and "RESEARCH FINDINGS AND DISCUSSION".
    Why is this considered the body?
    This section contains the core details and main findings of the research.
    1. "RESEARCH METHOD" explains how the study was conducted. It describes the research design (descriptive qualitative), the population and sample (60 students, 3 teachers, and 2 industry officers), and the instruments used to collect data (interviews, observation, and documents).
    2. "RESEARCH FINDINGS AND DISCUSSION" presents the results of the data collected. This part shows findings such as the low level of students' competence and the mismatch between the taught curriculum and the needs of the professional world. The discussion also explores the factors influencing these conditions, such as teachers' lack of commitment to the syllabus and uninnovative teaching methods.

    - Conclusion
    The conclusion is located on page 11, under the heading "CONCLUSION".

    Why is it considered the conclusion?
    This section summarizes the main findings of the entire study. It highlights the significant gap between the desired English skills and the actual competence of the students. The section also provides practical suggestions and recommendations to address the issues, such as the need for teachers to be more committed to the syllabus and for routine supervision from the head of the study program.

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  15. Nama : Siti Nurul Mafudoh
    NIM : 231250017
    Kelas : MPI 5 A

    Introduction

    The article begins by highlighting the importance of vocational schools as institutions that prepare students with practical and technical skills for various professions such as automotive, engineering, healthcare, and construction. However, it emphasizes that English communicative competence is a crucial skill needed to compete in today’s globalized workforce. The introduction also explains the challenges faced by vocational schools in teaching English, including limited instructional time, lack of practice opportunities, and students’ low motivation. Furthermore, it presents the concept of communicative competence, based on Hughes’ theory, as the ability to use language effectively and appropriately in real-world contexts. The research is positioned as a response to the gap between vocational graduates’ skills and industry demands, with the purpose of assessing students’ level of English communicative competence, their needs, and strategies to improve them.

    Body

    The body of the article is divided into methodology, findings, and discussion:
    1. Methodology
    The study used a qualitative descriptive approach involving 60 students, 3 English teachers, and 2 industry officers from Garuda Maintenance Facilities. Data were collected through interviews, classroom observations, and syllabus/document analysis.
    2. Findings
    -Students’ Competence Students showed relatively good understanding of grammar and structure but weaker skills in vocabulary, phonology, and real communication tasks.
    -NeedsStudents expressed dissatisfaction with limited learning time, lack of engaging media, and monotonous teaching methods. They requested more practical and industry-related materials.
    -Teachers’ PracticesTeachers admitted they often did not fully apply the syllabus and relied on textbooks and lecture methods. They also faced difficulties in managing students and delivering materials effectively.
    -Industry Perspective Industry officers considered vocational graduates technically skilled but lacking sufficient English competence, especially in speaking, writing, and understanding technical vocabulary.

    3. Discussion
    The article interprets these findings as evidence of a misalignment between the curriculum and workplace requirements. It stresses that current English instruction focuses too much on general skills (e.g., writing letters) rather than English for Specific Purposes (ESP). It also notes the lack of innovative teaching methods, weak teacher commitment to the syllabus, and insufficient integration of media and interactive practices. The discussion argues for revising the syllabus to match industry needs, strengthening teacher training, and promoting student-centered approaches.

    Conclusion

    The conclusion emphasizes that there is a significant gap between the English communicative competence expected from vocational students and their actual abilities. It attributes this gap to limited teacher commitment, inadequate resources, and curriculum misalignment with workplace needs. To address this, the article recommends:

    * Teachers’ stronger adherence to and revision of the syllabus based on students’ vocational needs.
    * More interactive, student-centered, and media-rich teaching methods.
    * Regular supervision and evaluation by school authorities.
    * Collaborative efforts such as teacher forums (MGMP) to standardize vocational English syllabi.

    Ultimately, the study argues that improving English communicative competence is essential for vocational students’ employability and success in the global job market.

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  16. Nama : Fariha Bintang Cahyani
    Nim : 231250018
    Kelas : MPI 5.A

    - Introduction
    Vocational schools in Indonesia aim to prepare students with practical skills and technical knowledge needed for various professions. However, English language learning in these schools faces challenges, especially because of limited instructional time and curriculum that is not fully aligned with workplace demands. Communicative competence covering speaking, writing, listening, and sociolinguistic skills is crucial for students to be competitive in a globalized workforce. This study, therefore, investigates the level of vocational students’ communicative competence, their needs, and strategies to improve their English skills.

    - Body
    The research was conducted in a private vocational school in Tangerang with sixty students, three English teachers, and two industry officers as participants. Findings show that students generally have stronger competence in grammar and structure, but weaker skills in vocabulary, phonology, and practical communication. Many students also feel that English learning is monotonous due to traditional teaching methods and minimal use of media. Teachers often do not apply the syllabus consistently, and the 2013 curriculum focuses mostly on general English rather than industry-specific needs. Industry representatives emphasized that while graduates are technically skilled, their English proficiency is insufficient for workplace communication. Thus, the study highlights the need for a more contextualized syllabus, innovative teaching methods, and consistent curriculum implementation to meet vocational demands.

    - Conclusion
    The study concludes that there is a gap between vocational students’ English communicative competence and industry expectations. To overcome this, teachers must commit to the syllabus, adapt materials to students’ vocational needs, and use interactive methods. School leaders should provide supervision and professional development to ensure consistent quality. By fostering a culture of innovation and aligning teaching with workplace requirements, vocational schools can equip graduates with the communicative competence necessary for success in the global job market.

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