Writing an essay is a part of academic practices. People transform their ideas and thoughts into any written texts. If they do not have any topics, they could read other authors' texts either in online media or in offline media such as journals, articles, e-book, etc. You as the writer could apply ATM (See, Imitate, and Modify or we say Amati Tiru and Modifikasi) while writing an essay. Therefore, this final test provides two questions and one project to evaluate the students' ability of the subject. To do the test, you could open this link.
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Name : Novi Puji Lestari
ReplyDeleteClass : 3 E TBI
NIM : 191230144
1. The UK origin of the industrial revolution also can be explained by a focus of demand. At that time, worker's salary was high, but the energy from coal was cheap. This inspired The company (The Leader) to generate the development of mechanical invention based on steam power, which enabled the company to reduce the expenses by mechanising production.
2. There are 3 types of referencing system based on Bailey (2011) :
(a) The Harvard system, generally used for English Language and Business.
The Example :
The novel begins with the grim image of the train passengers’ faces, which are described as ‘pale yellow, the colour of the fog’ (Dostoyevsky, 2004, p. 5).
(b) The Vancouver system, widely used in Medicine and Science.
Example :
Geck MJ, Yoo S, Wang JC. Assessment of cervical ligamentous injury in trauma patients using MRI. J Spinal Disord. 2001;14(5):371-7.
c). The footnote system (also known as endnotes), commonly used in the
Humanities, in which sources are listed at the bottom of the page and
again at the end of the paper.
Example :
It has long been argued that pork and leek sausages are better than pork and apple.1 However, Neville has recently produced conclusive evidence to the contrary.2
1 John Butcher, The Perfect Sausage: From Pigsty to Plate (Cumberland: Pork Press, 1990), pp. 78-90.
2 Harry Neville, Breakfast Bangers (London: Brown, 2005), pp. 56-98.
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ReplyDeleteName : Lala Rosdiana
ReplyDeleteNIM : 191230163
Class : TBI 3E
1. *****
There are various systems of referencing in use in the academic world,
A). The Harvard system, generally used for English Language and Business.
*The Example :
-Smith (2009) argues that the popularity of the Sports Utility
Vehicle (SUV) is irrational, as despite their high cost most are
never driven off-road. In his view ‘they are bad for road safety,
the environment and road congestion’ (Smith, 2009: 37).
---References
Smith, M. (2009) Power and the State. Basingstoke:
Palgrave MacMillan.
B). The Vancouver system, widely used in Medicine and Science. Numbers
in brackets are inserted after the citation and these link to a numbered
list of references:
*The Example :
-Jasanoff (5) makes the point that the risk of cross-infection is
growing.
---(5) Jasanoff, M. Tuberculosis: A Sub-Saharan
Perspective. New York: Schaffter (2001)
C). The footnote system (also known as endnotes), commonly used in the
Humanities, in which sources are listed at the bottom of the page and
again at the end of the paper. The numbers in superscript run
consecutively throughout the paper:
*The Example :
-The effects of the French Revolution were felt throughout
Europe.^3
---^3 Karl Wildavsky, The End of an Era: Spain 1785–1815
(Dublin: University Press, 2006), p. 69
2. ***
Paraphrase :
---According to Allen (2009). He argued that Britain had priority over demand, and at that time the cost of cheap coal and rising labor costs. thus, encouraging the use of steam power to mechanize production, thereby saving wages and increasing profits. Because of that, Britain experienced the industrial revolution for the first time.
Permission to add clarity to the answer Miss...
Delete*Types of referencing systems based on Bailey (2011).
Name : Arli Salsabila
ReplyDeleteNIM : 191230153
Class: TBI 3 E
1. focused on the demands of the industrial revolution in UK, it can be explained that at that time the wages of workers were high, but energy from coal was cheap. with this it encourages companies to develop mechanical inventions based on steam power. which will allow the company to reduce costs by mechanizing production.
2. (a) The Harvard system, generally used for English Language and Business.
Ex: Smith, M. (2009) Power and the State. Basingstoke:
Palgrave MacMillan.
(b) The Vancouver system, widely used in Medicine and Science. Numbers
in brackets are inserted after the citation and these link to a numbered
list of references:
Jasanoff (5) makes the point that the risk of cross-infection is
growing.
Ex: Jasanoff, M. Tuberculosis: A Sub-Saharan
Perspective. New York: Schaffter (2001)
(c) The footnote system (also known as endnotes), commonly used in the
Humanities, in which sources are listed at the bottom of the page and
again at the end of the paper. The numbers in superscript run
consecutively throughout the paper:
The effects of the French Revolution were felt throughout
Europe.
Ex: Karl Wildavsky, The End of an Era: Spain 1785–1815
(Dublin: University Press, 2006), p. 69
Name : Sarniti
ReplyDeleteNIM : 191230159
Class : TBI 3-E
1. Paraphrase:
To help explain the UK origin of the Industrial revolution, Allen focusing on demand.
Because at the time, workers get very high wages, but not at the price of coal energy, which was inexpensive.
This has led to the development of mechanical inventions based on steam power. And it also allows bosses to save money by doing mechanical production.
2. Types of referencing systems based on Bailey (2011).
There are various systems of referencing in use in the academic world, With any system, the most important point is to be consistent.
(a) The Harvard system, generally used for English Language and Business.
Example the Harvard system.
Format :
Author surname, initial. (Year) Book title. City: Publisher.
Example :
Smith, Z. (2017) Swing time. London: Penguin.
(b) The Vancouver system, widely used in Medicine and Science.
Example :
- Jasanoff, M. Tuberculosis: A Sub-Saharan Perspective. New York: Schaffter (2001)
- O'Campo P, Dunn JR, editors. Rethinking social epidemiology: towards a science of change. Dordrecht: Springer; 2012. 348 p.
(c) The footnote system (also known as endnotes), commonly used in the Humanities, in which sources are listed at the bottom of the page and again at the end of the paper.
Example :
- Karl Wildavsky, The End of an Era: Spain 1785–1815(Dublin: University Press, 2006), p. 69
- Cordell, D 2011, The Story of Phosphorus, Oxford University Press, Melbourne, p. 56
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ReplyDeleteName : Ade Wirdatus Sholihah
ReplyDeleteClass : TBI 3 E
NIM : 191230149
Subject : Essay Writing
1. A focus on demand may help to explain the UK origin of the industrial revolution. At that time workers’ pay was high, but energy from coal was inexpensive. This encouraged the development of mechanical inventions based on steam power, which enabled bosses to save money by mechanising production (Allen, 2009).
Paraphrase
The origin of the British industrial revolution was when it focused on demand that helped develop the invention of mechanisms based on steam power. at that time the wages of workers were high and bosses benefited from reduced production costs and cheap coal energy.
2. There are three types of reference systems based on Bailey (2011), they are :
• The Harvard system It is generally used for English Language and Business.
• The Vancouver system It is widely used in Medicine and Science.
• The Footnote system It is known as endnotes that commonly used in the Humanities, in which sources are listed at the bottom of the page and again at the end of the paper.
Example
• The Harvard system : Marks, J (2007). English Pronounciation in use Elementary Self-study and Classroom Use. United Kingdom : the University Press, Cambrige.
• The Vancouver system : Grinspoon L, Bakalar JB. Marijuana: the Forbidden Medicine. London: Yale Univ Pr; 1993.
• The Footnote system :
Consumers are profited by the rapid technological growth of innovation created by businesses plus maintained services.
1 Rachmat Usman, Hukum Persaingan Usaha (Jakarta: PT. Gramedia Pustaka Utama, 2014), p. 9
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ReplyDeleteNama : Muhammad Ikhwan
ReplyDeleteNIM : 191230156
Class : TBI 3E
1. A focus on demand may help to explain the UK origin of the industrial revolution. At that time workers' pay was high, but energy from coal was inexpensive. This encouraged the development of mechanical inventions based on steam power, which enabled bosses to save money by mechanising production (Allen, 2009).
Paraphrase :
One of the things that can help explain the origin of the revolution in Britain is a focus on demand. In addition, the thing that drives the development of steam-powered mechanical inventions is the high wages of workers, but the price of coal is not expensive. By doing so, they could do mechanical production, thus saving the bosses money.
2. References Systems based on Bailey (2011):
a. The Harvard system, generally used for English Language and Business.
Example :
Smith (2009) argues that the popularity of the Sports Utility
Vehicle (SUV) is irrational, as despite their high cost most are
never driven off-road. In his view ‘they are bad for road safety,
the environment and road congestion’ (Smith, 2009: 37).
Reference :
Smith, M. (2009) Power and the State. Basingstoke : Palgrave MacMillan
b. The Vancouver system, widely used in Medicine and Science.
Example :
Jasanoff (5) makes the point that the risk of cross-infection is
growing.
(5) Jasanoff, M. Tuberculosis: A Sub-Saharan
Perspective. New York: Schaffter (2001)
c. The footnote system (also known as endnotes), commonly used in the
Humanities, in which sources are listed at the bottom of the page and
again at the end of the paper.
Example :
The effects of the French Revolution were felt throughout
Europe.¹
Karl Wildavsky, The End of an Era: Spain 1785–1815
(Dublin: University Press, 2006), p. 69
Name: Rifatul Muftiah
ReplyDeleteNim : 191230171
Class: TBI 3E
1. Paraphrase
(Allan 2009) it seems likely that the bosses will go about saving money from mechanized use because the development focus on demand will help explain the origin of Britain's industrial revolution. Those days paid high wages, but energy from coal was inexpensive. This prompts mechanical discoveries based on steam power
2. there are 3 types of referecing system
A. The harvard system, generally used for English language and business
Example
Smith, John. (2005). Playing nicely together. St. Petersburg, FL (USA): Wikimedia Foundation.
B. The vancouver system, widely used in medicine and science
Example:
Feinberg TE, Farah MJ: Behavioural Neurology and Neuropsychology. New York: McGraw-Hill; 1997.
C. The footnote system (also known as endnotes), commonly used in the humanities, in which sources are listed at the bottom of the page and again at the end of the paper
Example
Patrick Wesell dan Arnold Jonathan, Anatomy of Atom (New Zealand: Light Pen, 1989), p. 36-40.
Nama : Mohamad Adam Firdaus
ReplyDeleteNIM : 191230154
Kelas : TBI 3E
1. The background for the industrial revolution in the UK was because at that time the cost of paying workers was very high, so the bosses thought of another way, namely by using a steam engine because at that time the price of coal was cheap so that it could be used as fuel for the engine.
2. - The Harvard system, generally used for English Language and Business,
Example : Smith, John. (2005). Playing nicely together. St. Petersburg, FL (USA): Wikimedia Foundation.
- The Vancouver system, widely used in Medicine and Science.
Example : Grinspoon L, Bakalar JB. Marijuana: the Forbidden Medicine. London: Yale Univ Pr; 1993.
- The footnote system (also known as endnotes), commonly used in the humanities, in which sources are listed at the bottom of the page and again at the end of the paper.
Example : Cordell, D 2011, The Story of Phosphorus, Oxford University Press, Melbourne, p. 56
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ReplyDeleteName : Ahmad Hapiduddin
ReplyDeleteNIM : 191230172
Class : TBI III E
1.A focus on demand may help to explain the UK ancestry of the industrial revolution. At that timeworkers’ wages was high, but energy from coal was economical. This uplifted the development of mechanical creations supported on steamer powerfulness which enabled bosses to save banknote by mechanising yield.
2.- The Harvard System, generally used for english language and buisness.
Example : Coetzee, J.M. (2000) Disgrace. London: Vintage.
- The Vancouver System, widely used in medicine and science.
Example : Press WH, Teukolsky SA, Vetterling WT, Flannery BP. Numerical recipes: the art of scientific computing. Cambridge, UK: Cambridge University Press (2007)
- The Footnote System (also known as endnotes), commonly used in the humanities, in which sources are listed at the bottom of the page and again at the end of the paper.
Example :
Since FSP theorist do not take sentence position as the only criterion for assigning thematic status to clause elements, it follows that two alternative formulations of the same message can have the same thematic analysis.1
1
Mona Baker, In Other Words: A coursebook on Translation (Abingdon: Routlege, 2011), p. 175
Name: Nafa Nabilah Azzahra
ReplyDeletenim: 181230166
class: Tbi 3 E
- The origin of the British industrial revolution stems from coal energy, which is no longer expensive and causes workers salaries to be high. That is what development to find mechanisms based on steam power, therefore the bos can save money and carry out mechanizationz.
(a) The Harvard system, generally used for English Language and Business,
illustrated in (2) above.
Example: Eliot, G. (2017) Silas Marmer. Edited by Atkinson, J. Oxford: Oxford University Press
(b) The Vancouver system, widely used in Medicine and Science. Numbers
in brackets are inserted after the citation and these link to a numbered
list of references:
Example: Brown, W. H.; Poon, T. Introduction to Organic Chemistry, 6th ed.; Wiley: Hoboken, NJ, 2017.
(c) The footnote system (also known as endnotes), commonly used in the
Humanities, in which sources are listed at the bottom of the page and
again at the end of the paper. The numbers in superscript run
consecutively throughout the paper:
Example: John Conrad and James W. Merritt, "Variant Specific Epitopes of Giardia Lamblia", Molecular and Biochemical Parasitology 42, no. 1 (1990): 125-32.
Name : Anugrah Restu Fauzi
ReplyDeleteNIM : 191230147
Class : TBI 3E
Answer :
1. According to (Allen, 2009). The UK origin of the industrial revolution started when the development of mechanical inventions based on steam power, could save money by mechanising production. Because at that time workers' pay was high, even though the energy from coal was inexpensive.
2.
a) The Harvard system/style, generally used for English Language and Business.
Example :
Conley, D 2002, The daily miracle: an introduction to journalism, Oxford University Press,New York.
b) The Vancouver system/style, widely used in Medicine and Science.
Example :
Lawhead JB, Baker MC. Introduction to veterinary science. Clifton Park (NY): Thomson Delmar Learning; 2005.
c) The Footnote system/style, commonly used in the Humanities, in which sources are listed at the bottom of the page and again at the end of the paper.
Example :
Text :
The effects of the French Revolution were felt throughout Europe.³
Reference :
³ Karl Wildavsky, The End of an Era: Spain 1785–1815 (Dublin: University Press, 2006), p. 69
Name : Ainun isnani
ReplyDeleteClass : TBI 3 (E)
NIM : 191230151
1. He concluded the opinion that the British industrial revolution. At that time had coal at low or cheap prices but greatly increased workers' salaries. Based on this, it can encourage the development of the invention of the steam power mechanism, which allows it to help save money and increase the labor force by carrying out the production mechanism.
2. (A). The Harvard system, generally used for English Language and Business,
Example : Smith, M. (2009) Power and the State. Basingstoke:
Palgrave MacMillan.
-Smith (2009) argues that the popularity of the Sports Utility
Vehicle (SUV) is irrational, as despite their high cost most are
never driven off-road. In his view ‘they are bad for road safety,
the environment and road congestion’ (Smith, 2009: 37).
(B). The Vancouver system, widely used in Medicine and Science. Numbers
in brackets are inserted after the citation and these link to a numbered
list of references:
- Jasanoff (5) makes the point that the risk of cross-infection is
growing
Example : Jasanoff, M. Tuberculosis: A Sub-Saharan
Perspective. New York: Schaffter (2001)
(C). The footnote system (also known as endnotes), commonly used in the
Humanities, in which sources are listed at the bottom of the page and
again at the end of the paper. The numbers in superscript run
consecutively throughout the paper:
Example :
-The effects of the French Revolution were felt throughout.
Europe.
Karl Wildavsky, The End of an Era: Spain 1785–1815
(Dublin: University Press, 2006), p. 69
Nama : Ahmad Muttaqin
ReplyDeleteNIM : 191230173
Class : TBI 3 E
1.A focus on demand may help to explain the UK ancestry of the industrial revolution. At that timeworkers’ wages was high, but energy from coal was economical. This uplifted the development of mechanical creations supported on steamer powerfulness which enabled bosses to save banknote by mechanising yield.
2. There are 3 types of referencing system based on Bailey (2011) :
(a) The Harvard system, generally used for English Language and Business.
The Example :
The novel begins with the grim image of the train passengers’ faces, which are described as ‘pale yellow, the colour of the fog’ (Dostoyevsky, 2004, p. 5).
(b) The Vancouver system, widely used in Medicine and Science.
Example :
Geck MJ, Yoo S, Wang JC. Assessment of cervical ligamentous injury in trauma patients using MRI. J Spinal Disord. 2001;14(5):371-7.
c). The footnote system (also known as endnotes), commonly used in the
Humanities, in which sources are listed at the bottom of the page and
again at the end of the paper.
Example :
It has long been argued that pork and leek sausages are better than pork and apple.1 However, Neville has recently produced conclusive evidence to the contrary.2
1 John Butcher, The Perfect Sausage: From Pigsty to Plate (Cumberland: Pork Press, 1990), pp. 78-90.
Name : Rifal Nurkholis
ReplyDeleteClass : TBI 3E
Nim. : 191230167
1. Paraphrase
A center on request may offer assistance to clarify the UK root of the pay was tall, but energy from coal was reasonable. This energized the improvement of mechanical innovations based on steam control, which empowered bosses to spare cash by automating production.
2. there are 3 types of referecing system
A. The harvard system, generally used for English language and business
Example :
Smith, John. (2005). Playing nicely together. St. Petersburg, FL (USA): Wikimedia Foundation.
B. The Vancouver system, widely used in Medicine and Science.
Example :
Jasanoff (5) makes the point that the risk of cross-infection is
growing.
C. The footnote system (also known as endnotes), commonly used in the Humanities, in which sources are listed at the bottom of the page and again at the end of the paper.
Example :
- Karl Wildavsky, The End of an Era: Spain 1785–1815(Dublin: University Press, 2006), p. 69
- Cordell, D 2011, The Story of Phosphorus, Oxford University Press, Melbourne, p. 56
Name : Kharisma Nidaul Hasanah
ReplyDeleteNIM : 191230146
Class : TBI 3 E
1. The development of mechanical inventions derived from steam power made the owner able to save money in producing mechanics, because during the British industrial revolution the wages of workers were high but the energy derived from coal was not expensive.
2. References Systems based on Bailey (2011) :
- The Harvard system, generally used for English Language and Business, illustrated in (2) above.
Example : Kotler, P, Adam, S, Brown, L & Armstrong, G 2003, Principles of marketing, 2nd edn, Pearson Education Australia, Melbourne.
- The Vancouver system, widely used in Medicine and Science. Numbers in brackets are inserted after the citation and these link to a numbered list of references.
Example : Rang HP, Dale MM, Ritter JM, Moore PK. Pharmacology. 5th ed. Edinburgh: Churchill Livingstone; 2003.
- The footnote system (also known as endnotes), commonly used in the Humanities, in which sources are listed at the bottom of the page and again at the end of the paper.
Example : Cordell, D 2011, The Story of Phosphorus, (Oxford University Press, Melbourne), p. 56.
Name : serlin sarah maulani
ReplyDeleteClass : TBI 3 E
NIM : 191230160
Answer
1) According to (Allen, 2009). Before the British industrial revolution, the salaries of workers at that time were high while the coal they sold was inexpensive. This is what led to the development of the invention of the steam engine that could save money with the production mechanic.
2) There are 3 types of referencing system :
1. The Harvard system, generally used for English Language and Business
Example : Hall, M 1999, ‘Breaking the silence: marginalisation of registered nurses employed in nursing homes’, Contemporary Nurse, vol. 8, no. 1, hh. 232-237.
2. The Vancouver system, widely used in Medicine and Science. Numbers
in brackets are inserted after the citation and these link to a numbered
Example : Grinspoon L, Bakalar JB. Marijuana: the Forbidden Medicine.London: Yale
Univ Pr; 1993.
3. The footnote system (also known as endnotes), commonly used in the
Humanities, in which sources are listed at the bottom of the page and
again at the end of the paper.
Example : Siti Mutmainah, Indonesian for Higher Education, (Malang: Literasi Nusantara Abdai, 2019), p. 94.
Name: Talitha Zuleika
ReplyDeleteNim : 191230161
Class: TBI 3E
1. Paraphrase
(Allan 2009) It explains that the origin of many British revolutionary workers was high, but the energy from coal was cheap. And was helpful in prodding the mechanically generated inventions of steam power, which enabled bosses to save money on their production
2. there are 3 types of referecing system
A. The harvard system, generally used for English language and business
Example
Conley, D 2002, The daily miracle: an introduction to journalism, Oxford University Press,New York.
Sistem penulisan referensi Harvard
B. The vancouver system, widely used in medicine and science
Example:
Feinberg TE, Farah MJ, editors. Behavioural Neurology and Neuropsychology. Ed ke2. New York: McGraw-Hill; 1997.
C. The footnote system (also known as endnotes), commonly used in the humanities, in which sources are listed at the bottom of the page and again at the end of the paper
Example
“India”, Ensiklopedy Indonesia, (Jakarta: Ikhtisar Baru-Van Hoeve, 1982), p. 1402-1407.
2. there are 3 types of referecing system
A. The harvard system, generally used for English language and business
Example
Conley, D 2002, The daily miracle: an introduction to journalism, Oxford University Press,New York.
Sistem penulisan referensi Harvard
B. The vancouver system, widely used in medicine and science
Example:
Feinberg TE, Farah MJ, editors. Behavioural Neurology and Neuropsychology. Ed ke2. New York: McGraw-Hill; 1997.
C. The footnote system (also known as endnotes), commonly used in the humanities, in which sources are listed at the bottom of the page and again at the end of the paper
Example
“India”, Ensiklopedy Indonesia, (Jakarta: Ikhtisar Baru-Van Hoeve, 1982), p. 1402-1407.
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ReplyDeleteName : Siti Komariah Ulfayati
ReplyDeleteNim : 191230142
Class : TBI 3E
1. In explaining the UK origin of industrial revolution it can be helped by focusing on demand. And it causes the salaries of the workers to be high thus encourages the development of mechanical inventions in steam power, and by mechanizing production also makes the bosses become frugal (Allen, 2009).
2. Types of reference systems
a). The Harvard system, generally used for English language and Business.
Example :
D. Gibson, Jerry, 2007, Multimedia Communication Directions and Innovations, Academic Press, San Diego
b). The vancouver system, widely used in medicine and science. Numbers in brackets are inserted after the citation and these link to a numbered of references.
Example :
Lawhead JB, Baker MC, Introduction to veterinary science. Clifton Park (NY): Thomson Delmar Learning; 2005.
c). The footnote system (also known as endnotes), commonly used in the humanities, in which sources are listed at the bottom of the page and again at the end of the paper.
Example :
¹Patrick Wesell dan Arnold Setiadi, Struktur Atom(Jakarta: Bina Sanjaya, 1996), hal. 60-70.
1. The Answer:
ReplyDeleteA center on request may offer assistance to clarify the UK root of the mechanical transformation. At that time workers’ pay was tall, but vitality from coal was reasonable. This empowered the improvement of mechanical developments based on steam control, which empowered bosses to spare cash by automating generation (Allen, 2009).
2. Types of Referencing System based on Bailey (2011) there are:
- The Harvard System
It is generally used for English Language and Bussiness.
Example:
* Branford, A & Coutts, L 2015b, The wishing seed, Walker Books Australia, Newtown, NSW.
Cancer Council 2017, Causes of cancer, Cancer Council, viewed 21 May 2018, .
- - The Vancouver System
It is widely used in Medicine and Science. Numbers in brackets are inserted after the citation and these link to a numbered list of references.
Example:
Citations within the text of your paper are identified with a number in round brackets.
Example: Jones (1) has argued that…
(1) Errami M, Garner H. A tale of two citations. Nature. 2008;451(7177): 397–399.
(2) Goldacre B. Dore – the media’s miracle cure for dyslexia. Bad Science. Weblog.
Available from: http://www.badscience.net/2008/05/dore-the-medias-miracle-cure-for-
dyslexia/#more-705 [Accessed 19th June 2015].
- - The Footnote System
It is known as endnotes that commonly used in the Humanities, in which sources are listed at the bottom of the page and again at the end of the paper.
Example:
Breaker Morant has been described as, "... a hard-fisted bushman, a versifier, womaniser, drunkard, gambler, a brilliant horseman, social success, brave soldier, and a ruthless
adversary ...".1
1. Kit Denton, Closed File (Adelaide: Rigby, 1983), 68.
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ReplyDeleteNama : Iin Anis Setiawati
ReplyDeleteNIM : 191230150
1. At that time in the UK the wages of workers were high, and coal energy was cheap. Due to the focus on demand there was a UK industrial revolution which encouraged the development of mechanical inventions based on steam engines that could save costs with this production machine
2. types of referencing systems based on Bailey (2011) :
a. The Harvard system : It is generally used for English Language and Business,
Example
- Smith, M. (2009) Power and the State. Basingstoke: Palgrave MacMillan.
- Littlejohn, S. W. (2002) Theories of human communication. California: Wadsworth.
b. The Vancouver system : It is widely used in Medicine and Science. Numbers in brackets are inserted after the citation and these link to a numbered list of references:
Example :
- Jasanoff (5) makes the point that the risk of cross-infection is growing.
→ (5) Jasanoff, M. Tuberculosis: A Sub-Saharan Perspective. New York: Schaffter (2001)
- Matthews M.: A Short Course in Soil and Rock Slope Engineering. London: Thomas Telford Publishing; (2001)
c. The Footnote system : It is known as endnotes that commonly used in the Humanities, in which sources are listed at the bottom of the page and again at the end of the paper. The numbers in superscript run consecutively throughout the paper:
Example :
- The effects of the French Revolution were felt throughout Europe. 3
→ 3 Karl Wildavsky, The End of an Era: Spain 1785–1815 (Dublin: University Press, 2006), p. 69
- Dunstan, Ewen, Sources of ideas (Boston: Sun Press, 2004), p. 71-78.
Name : Evah Farihah
ReplyDeleteNIM : 191230155
Class: TBI 3 E
1. Focus on the guidance of revolution in England. It was explained that at the time wages were high, but coal energy was cost-effective, hence improved the development of mechanical creations based on steam power, and enabled companies to reduce the cost of mechanization.
2. (a) The Harvard system, generally used for English Language and Business.
Ex: Smith, M. (2009) Power and the State. Basingstoke:
Palgrave MacMillan.
(b) The Vancouver system, widely used in Medicine and Science. Numbers
in brackets are inserted after the citation and these link to a numbered
list of references:
Jasanoff (5) makes the point that the risk of cross-infection is
growing.
Ex: Jasanoff, M. Tuberculosis: A Sub-Saharan
Perspective. New York: Schaffter (2001)
(c) The footnote system (also known as endnotes), commonly used in the
Humanities, in which sources are listed at the bottom of the page and
again at the end of the paper. The numbers in superscript run
consecutively throughout the paper:
The effects of the French Revolution were felt throughout
Europe.
Ex: Karl Wildavsky, The End of an Era: Spain 1785–1815
(Dublin: University Press, 2006), p. 69
Name:Alfiah Dwi Rahayu
ReplyDeleteNim: 191230157
Class: TBI 3E
1. Paraphrase
A focus on demand might also additionally assist to provide an explanation for the United Kingdom beginning of the economic revolution. At that point workers’ pay become high, however electricity from coal become inexpensive. This advocated the improvement of mechanical innovations primarily based totally on steam power, which enabled bosses to shop cash with the aid of using mechanising production.
2. References Systems based on Bailey (2011):
- The Harvard system, generally used for English Language and Business, illustrated in (2) above.
Example:
Conley, D. (2002), The daily miracle: an introduction to journalism, Oxford University Press, New York.
- The Vancouver system, widely used in Medicine and Science. Numbers in brackets are inserted after the citation and these link to a numbered list of references.
Example:
Feinberg TE, Farah MJ, editors. Behavioural Neurology and Neuropsychology. New York: McGraw-Hill (1997).
- The footnote system (also known as endnotes), commonly used in the Humanities, in which sources are listed at the bottom of the page and again at the end of the paper.
Example:
Cordell, D 2011, The Story of Phosphorus, (Oxford University Press, Melbourne), p. 56
Name : Erna Erawati
ReplyDeleteNIM : 191230164
Class : TBI 3 E
Final exam
1. Allen (2009) claims that the best solution to explain the British of the eighteenth century is how to focus on the demand. At the moment, energy from coal was cheap, but employees' labor costs was high. Therefore, it's supported the development of mechanise inventions based on steam power which possibility boss thrift money with mechanical production.
2. Reference system :
* The Harvard system. It is generally used for English Language and Business.
Ex : Frank, M. (1972) Modern English A Practical Reference Guide. Ney Jersey : Prentice Hall
* The Vancouver system. It is widely used in Medicine and Science.
Ex : (4) Rolf, Ed. Oral Implants Broactivating Concepts. USA : Quintenssence Publishing (2013)
* The Footnote system. It is known as endnotes that commonly used in the
Humanities, in which sources are listed at the bottom of the page and again at the end of the paper.
Ex : 1 Diane Larsen, Techniques and Principles in Language Teaching (Oxford : Oxford University Press, 1986), p. 11
Name : Vanisa Nurul Fitri
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1. A focus on demand may help to explain the UK origin of the industrial revolution. At that time workers’ pay was high, but energy from coal was inexpensive. This encouraged the development of mechanical inventions based on steam power, which enabled bosses to save money by mechanising production (Allen, 2009).
Paraphrase
The origin of the British industrial revolution was when it focused on demand that helped develop the invention of mechanisms based on steam power. at that time the wages of workers were high and bosses benefited from reduced production costs and cheap coal energy.
2. Types of referencing systems based on Bailey (2011).
There are various systems of referencing in use in the academic world, With any system, the most important point is to be consistent.
(a) The Harvard system, generally used for English Language and Business. Example the Harvard system.
Format :
Author surname, initial. (Year) Book title. City: Publisher.
Example :
Smith, Z. (2017) Swing time. London: Penguin.
(b) The Vancouver system, widely used in Medicine and Science. Example :
- Jasanoff, M. Tuberculosis: A Sub-Saharan Perspective. New York: Schaffter (2001)
- O'Campo P, Dunn JR, editors. Rethinking social epidemiology: towards a science of change. Dordrecht: Springer; 2012. 348 p.
(c) The footnote system (also known as endnotes), commonly used in the Humanities, in which sources are listed at the bottom of the page and again at the end of the paper. Example :
- Karl Wildavsky, The End of an Era: Spain 1785–1815(Dublin: University Press, 2006), p. 69
- Cordell, D 2011, The Story of Phosphorus, Oxford University Press, Melbourne, p. 56
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1. According to (Allen, 2009). The UK origin of the industrial revolution started when the development of mechanical inventions based on steam power, could save money by mechanising production. Because at that time workers' pay was high, even though the energy from coal was inexpensive.
2. there are 3 types of referecing system
A. The harvard system, generally used for English language and business
Example :
Smith, John. (2005). Playing nicely together. St. Petersburg, FL (USA): Wikimedia Foundation.
B. The vancouver system, widely used in medicine and science
Example:
Feinberg TE, Farah MJ: Behavioural Neurology and Neuropsychology. New York: McGraw-Hill; 1997.
C. The footnote system (also known as endnotes), commonly used in the humanities, in which sources are listed at the bottom of the page and again at the end of the paper
Example:
Patrick Wesell dan Arnold Jonathan, Anatomy of Atom (New Zealand: Light Pen, 1989), p. 36-40.
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1. Paraphrase
The push for the development of mechanical inventions based on system strength occurred at a time when workers' wages were high, but energy from coal was inexpensive, allowing bosses to save money by operating the production mechanism while explaining the origin of the UK Industrial revolution. According to (Allen,2009)
2. Types of Referencing system based on Bailey (2011)
A. The Harvard System
It is generally used for English language and bussines.
Ex:
Graham,B (2003). The Intelligent Investor. Harper Collins: Publisher
B.The Voncoucer System
It is widely used in Medicine and Scienc. Numbers in brackets are inserted after the citation and these link to a numbered list of references.
Ex:
Bynum (2) explores the history and development of Tuberculosis throughout the world.
- (2) Bynum,H. Spitting Blood: The History of Tuberculosis. Oxford University Press. New York.
C.The Footnote System
It is known as endnotes that commonly used in the Humanities, in which sources are listed as the bottom of the page and again at the end of the paper.
Ex:
• The boy is fifteen like the rest of us, but different in almost every other way.¹
- ¹Geoffrey Douglas. The Classmates: Privilage, Chaos and the end of an era. 2008.Hyperion
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(1) Paraphrase
The British industrial revolution began can be explanation by focusing on customer demand and at that time the wages of workers began to rise while the selling price of coal was low or cheap. therefore, to reduce high costs or save money, developing mechanical inventions based on steam is one of the steps or solutions taken by the boss for cost savings. (Allen, 2009)
(2) There are 3 types of referencing system based on Bailey (2011) :
1. The Harvard system, generally used for English Language and Business.
◆ E.g. Hatch, JA 2002, Doing qualitative research in education settings. State University of New York, Albany.
2. The Vancouver system, widely used in Medicine and Science. Numbers
in brackets are inserted after the citation and these link to a numbered.
◆ E.g. Ford HL, Sclafani RA, Degregori J. Cell cycle regulatory cascades. In: Stein GS, Pardee AB, editors. Cell cycle and growth control: biomolecular regulation and cancer. 2nd ed. Hoboken (NJ): Wiley-Liss; 2004. p. 42-67.
3. The footnote system (also known as endnotes), commonly used in the Humanities, in which sources are listed at the bottom of the page and again at the end of the paper.
◆ E.g. Breaker Morant has been described as, "... a hard-fisted bushman, a versifier, womaniser, drunkard, gambler, a brilliant horseman, social success, brave soldier, and a ruthless adversary ...". ¹
¹. Kit Denton, Closed File (Adelaide: Rigby, 1983), 68.
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ReplyDelete1). A focus on demand can help explain the origins of the UK industrial revolution. At that time the salary of workers is high, but the price of energy from coal is not expensive. This encourages development a mechanical invention based on steam power, which allowed bosses to save money by mechanics production (Allen, 2009).
2). Type of referencinh system based on Bailey (2011):
(a)The Harvard system, generally used for English Language and Business,
illustrated in above.
Ex: Frank, M. (1972) Modern English A Practical Reference Guide. Ney Jersey : Prentice Hall
(b) The Vancouver system, widely used in Medicine and Science. Numbers
in brackets are inserted after the citation and these link to a numbered
list of references:
Jasanoff makes the point that the risk of cross-infection is
growing.
Example : Jasanoff, M. Tuberculosis: A Sub-Saharan
Perspective. New York: Schaffter (2001)
(c) The footnote system (also known as endnotes), commonly used in the
Humanities, in which sources are listed at the bottom of the page and
again at the end of the paper. The numbers in superscript run
consecutively throughout the paper:
The effects of the French Revolution were felt throughout
Europe
Ex: Cordell, D 2011, The Story of Phosphorus, Oxford University Press, Melbourne, p. 56m
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TBI 3E
1. Paraphrase:
According to Allen in 2009, the industrial revolution was caused by the high of workers' pay meanwhile the energy from coal was cheap. The bosses are encouraged to save money by mechanising production.
2. Based on Bailey
a The Harvard system, generally used for English Language and Business.
Example the Harvard system
Smith, Z. (2017) Swing time. London: Penguin.
b. The Vancouver system, widely used in Medicine and Science.
Example :
O'Campo P, Dunn JR, editors. Rethinking social epidemiology: towards a science of change. Dordrecht: Springer; 2012. 348 p.
c. The footnote system (also known as endnotes), commonly used in the Humanities, in which sources are listed at the bottom of the page and again at the end of the paper.
Example :
Cordell, D 2011, The Story of Phosphorus, Oxford University Press, Melbourne, p. 56
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Answer :
1. The UK origin of the industrial revolution may help to explain a focus on demand. Energy from coal was inexpensive and worker's pay was high at the time. The development of mechanical inventions based on steam power in this encouraged, to save money which enabled bosses by mechanising production (Allen, 2009)
2.
• Reference system 1:
The Harvard system
It is generally used for English
Language and Business.
Reference:
-Smith, M. (2009) Power and the State.
Basingstoke: Palgrave MacMillan.
• Reference system 2:
The Vancouver system
It is widely used in Medicine and Science.
Numbers in brackets are inserted after the citation
and these link to a numbered list of references:
-Jasanoff (5) makes the point that the risk of
cross-infection is growing.
• Reference system 3:
The Footnote system
It is known as endnotes that commonly used in the
Humanities, in which sources are listed at the bottom
of the page and again at the end of the paper. The numbers in superscript run consecutively throughout
the paper:
-The effects of the French Revolution were felt
throughout Europe.3
→ 3 Karl Wildavsky, The End of an Era: Spain
1785–1815 (Dublin: University Press, 2006), p. 69